"allowed their eyes to mutate to the point of near-hypnotism," is about as clear and meaningful as "allowed their eyes to mutate to the point of near-bacon."
I get that you want them to have a hypnotic gaze, but you should improve clarity and provide some kind of explanation for how it works. On another note you should determine where in the wasteland these guys can be found.--OvaltinePatrol 20:09, May 5, 2012 (UTC)